Ormskirk Writers' & Literary Society - OWLS - was established in 1963 by Dora Doyle to promote local writers. Founder member Ron Bartholomew contributed to the Waverly Encyclopaedias and was widely published in Practical Mechanics Magazine. A successful playwright, he opened his house to us for weekly meetings and served us with tea and home made cakes for many years. As Otis lifts Chief Engineer he also designed the press button control boxes used in lifts to this day. ALT="Ormskirk Writers' & Literary Society">

Monday 7 December 2009

Going Back (The Moon Can't Wait)

This an extract from the opening of my new novella, Going Back (The Moon Can't Wait) which is available in the anthology The Moon Can't Wait available from Lulu.Com, £9.95, from 7th December 2009.
The anthology is a collection of 35 short stories of romance, comedy and the occasional murder. The novella is a mystery thriller, set on the Moon in the near future. It commemorates the 1969 Apollo Moon landings and coincides with the Copenhagen Treaty on Climate Change
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Friday 1200 Zulu
“We’ve lost contact with South Pole Base.”
This was big news. I could only speculate why Mission Director Lavrov was telling me first – if I was the first.
“Who’s this ‘we’?”
“Both us and Mission Control on Earth. All radio and data contact, telemetry, complete works became silent at 0900 Zulu, Friday.”
“The Sat links?”
“Both Sat links to us and direct feeds to Earth. Whole show went off at once. No warning, no prior emergency, nothing. Just like somebody pulled plug on entire base.”
“What does Mission Control say?”
“Somebody’s got to get ass down there and find out what’s happened.” I don’t know why, but I always find it amusing when Russians try to use American slang. Especially when agitated. “Assuming worst, till we know better.”
“When do we go?”
“We can’t prep a sub-orbital flight in under four weeks – ”
“Four weeks?” I was surprised. “Why the delay?”
“The Selena is undergoing routine overhaul and maintenance. Right now she’s lying around in Engineering Bay in about three thousand pieces.”
“Why is the car always in the shop just when you need it?” I said. Perhaps my levity was out of place. Certainly, Lavrov scowled at me.
“So we are sending team in one of the Marathons,” he added, somehow coping with his bad mood – at least he was regaining his fluency in English – “along with trailer carrying supplies for every kind of eventuality. That’s another reason for going by lunar surface route – bigger load.”
“But the surface trip from here to South Base is over five thousand kilometres – and that’s not counting the detours around craters. Especially as you get nearer – it’s, what?  –– like a thousand kilometres of Himalayas.”
“It’s been done before – and that was before rougher sections were bulldozed to make causeways and cuttings,” said Lavrov. “About the same as crossing the Sahara, end to end.” His expression had not improved any, so it still didn’t sound like some kind of picnic he was suggesting. “You can average 40 kilometres an hour which means 140 hours to get there – about six Earth days. Which is just as well as it’s only seven Earth days till Lunar night on the Earth side.”
“So who’s going on this jolly jaunt?” I asked. It was a safe bet I already knew one person who would be going. John Patterson. Me.
“Jim Sellars, Dr Li, Françoise Lagrange from medical and Ajali Ndege. Then there are two newcomers. Dr Ahmed Zubaydi and his assistant, Ibrahim Rashid.”
Newcomers indeed – I recognised their names from a recent passenger manifest, but knew nothing else. “Who are they?”
“They came in on the last trip from South Base before the Selena went for her overhaul.”
“What are their specialities?”
“Apart from having visited South Base and seen how it was just days ago?” Lavrov picked up and glanced at a slim folder for several seconds like he had never read it before. “Dr Zubaydi was expert in geological survey – oil prospecting, I gather – before he joined our team.” A pause. “Rashid is – ah – his right-hand man… been with him for years. Deputy-Directory Kennedy at South will have done a more thorough debriefing, seeing as they were joining his staff. They are visiting North just to get to know whole operation.”
“And who else?”
“And your good self, of course.” He still didn’t stop scowling.
“Why just seven of us?”
His scowl worsened, if that were possible. “If nothing serious has happened, there will be plenty of people there who can take care of themselves.”
“And if it is serious?”
“You won’t need more than seven of you.”
He filled me in on a few other details for my own speciality. “One last thing,” Lavrov added. “Keep in touch with us here at North Pole Base, every six hours. You know the protocol.”
I nodded. I knew the protocol. “Anything else?”
“Get back in one piece.”
I’d kind of planned that already.

Friday 1600 Zulu
Let me introduce you to a Marathon. It’s one hell of a bit of kit. It has twelve wheels, six in the forward tractor unit and six in the so-called trailer which was attached to the tractor by a fully sealed gimballed mid-section, like a flexible bus, although it could be jettisoned in an emergency, such as sliding down a crater wall and the like. It was unfair to call it a trailer, as drive went to all of its six wheels, just like the forward unit, which in turn wasn’t really a tractor in that it didn’t pull anything. In fact, each wheel has its own drive motor which could be cross-linked to any other wheel in case any motor failed. It could carry up to sixteen people, suitably equipped, though, on this occasion the rear unit would be full of stores with no passenger space. The whole thing weighed twelve thousand kilos on Earth, or just two thousand on the Moon. All of them were nick-named the “recreational vehicle” or “RV” by everyone that used them, both at North Pole Base where I normally spent my time, and at South Pole Base. There were five on the Moon in all with at least two stationed at each base and the fifth as a kind of spare. Each one cost one point eight billion dollars. Some RV.
The reason for always having at least two at each base was for contingency. Contingency and redundancy. When you live on the Moon you never adopt the mode of thought, “What if something goes wrong?” It’s always: “When things go wrong, I can do so-and-so.” There’s always a back-up, a spare, of everything from a spanner to a spacesuit. The only exceptions at all were the Selenas – the sub-orbital spacecraft – and the Atlases, the Earth-Moon shuttle/cargo craft – it simply wasn’t feasible to have duplicates of these hugely expensive transporters at both bases – we shared one a piece at each base with at least one either on Earth and one en route – four in all – and this was thought sufficient. That had worked out well, I couldn’t help thinking, considering the current circumstances, but then no-one had anticipated a whole base simply shutting down like a blown-out candle. As for our Selena, giving it regular and thorough maintenance was our way of covering our asses. That had worked out well, too, again given the same considerations. I can be quite cynical when I put my mind to it.
Considering what was about to happen, I was probably justified.

Tuesday 17 November 2009

OWLS Christmas Party

The Ormskirk Writers' Christmas Party is on Monday December 7th in the large downstairs room of New Church House Ormskirk.

Members admission is free and only £2 is charged for each of their guests.

There will be competions for :-

1 A Christmas Poem or Carol No more that 30 Lines.

2 A story to read at the Party Must be 100 words exactly and contain the following ten words once only in the order given. 1.french 2. terribly 3. brief 4. action 5. people 6.air 7.capable 8. glowering 9. lanuage 10. wheedling.

There will be a prize for the entry voted the most entertaining.

The guests can enter the competitions

Friday 6 November 2009

The Magic Sword

King Boden, in despair at losing yet another battle to defend his kingdom, the Kingdom of Icia, was sheltering in a cave and in fear for his life, when suddenly he was trapped by a Tall Stranger.

“What do you want?” cried King Boden. “I cannot defend myself for I have no weapon.”

“What would you wish for yourself?” said the Tall Stranger.

“If I could have anything right now, it would be a sword so that I could strike down any who threaten me or cause me fear.”

“Then take this,” said the stranger, producing from inside his voluminous cloak a sword. It was a sword like no other King Boden had ever seen. Its balance in the hand was perfection, its blade gleamed and its edge would make shame of a razor. King Boden hefted the sword in his hand. “You give me this, yet are unarmed. Do you not fear me now?”

“No,” said stranger, “I have fear of no man.”

“But why do you give me this sword?”

“I tell you this,” said the stranger. “This sword is a Magic Sword. With this, and as King, you will never taste defeat again. But you will never know love...”

And with that, the Tall Stranger was gone.

Sure enough, from that day on, King Boden was victorious in every battle. His armies grew stronger till all feared the power of Icia. Then one day he captured the Princess Alsanda, daughter of King Ezeck of the neighbouring land of Maggedor and took her hostage. Ezeck swore revenge against King Boden and declared war. But on the eve of battle, King Boden realised he was falling in love with his prisoner.

“You are indeed a beautiful princess,” he said. “I feel my heart yearning for your affection. What would it take for you to become my bride?”

“More than you have in your power to give!” she vowed. “Take yourself from me, for your presence poisons the very air.”

“But, Princess, if you would be mine there is nothing I would deny you. For without your love my heart will surely break.”

“Then let it break. Your destiny is on the battlefield and not within my affection.”

Angrily, King Boden left the Princess and went to prepare for victory or death at the hands of Ezeck and his warriors of Maggedor.

That day, on the vast Plain of Ildion, the mighty armies of Icia and Maggedor faced each other. Their weapons glinted in the pale cold sun shining balefully down upon them. King Boden had the unwilling Princess brought by guards to watch the battle.

“I ask you one last time,” said King Boden to the Princess, "If you would surrender to me as I demand, and be my bride, I would recall my soldiers. But if you deny me, you will see the men of your homeland scythed down like ripe corn.”

The Princess raised her noble head. “I and all the troops of Maggedor would sooner die than suffer such dishonour.” And she lowered her head once more and wept.

“That is your answer?” roared King Boden.

“That is the answer of all of the line of Maggedor,” whispered the Princess.

“Then so shall it be,” said Boden. With a curse, he wheeled his horse and galloped off to the head of his troops.

Arranged in the first line of battle upon the Plain of Ildion were the two cavalries, the horsemen of Icia decked in their colours of blue and gold, the knights of Maggedor in purple. The crests of their colours stood proud in the wind on the manes of the battle horses. But when at last the order to charge was given, not an animal would move from either side. The riders urged them on fiercely with blood-curdling battle cries, but the horses, snorting and pounding the earth with their hooves, refused to move forward, even an inch.

Realising the peril if his horsemen remained still and were charged by a powerful enemy, King Boden raced to the front of his troops. He had the Magic Sword, the ownership of which had made him the victor of so many battles. He could not be defeated.

King Ezeck, too, saw the danger his army was in, if the horses would not charge and attack the enemy. He galloped to the head of his army to urge them to attack. But to no avail. It was as if the horses had no wish to be a part of the wars of men.

Across the plain, the two kings dismounted from their steeds and turned to face each other. King Boden raised his sword in signal, and shouted. “King Ezeck. Our armies are evenly matched. There is no need for them to fight this day. We two can determine the outcome of this battle. Let us fight, just you and I, to decide the day.”

Ezeck knew of King Boden’s recent successes on the field of war. He had heard rumours of the Magic Sword, of how King Boden had come by it, in the cave with the Tall Stranger. He knew the promise the stranger had made that King Boden would never taste defeat as king while he had the sword. Yet he was not afraid. “I accept your challenge! He who wins our duel will win the war between Maggedor and Icia!”

“Victory in war!” cried King Boden.

“Victory in war!” Ezeck shouted back.

The two paced across the plain till they were in sword’s reach. A pause stayed them. The two armies looked on in thrall. Princess Alsanda swept the tears from her eyes upon seeing her father, standing proud. Then King Boden raised the Magic Sword and swung it fearsomely at King Ezeck’s head.
It was a mighty blow. Yet Ezeck parried, and deflected the lethal blade harmlessly. He too struck out with his weapon, but Boden denied the steel a target in his flesh.

And so the fight was joined. On it raged, blow followed by counter blow. Sometimes the fight seemed to favour one man, then the advantage would swing the other way. But neither man took wound.

“Surely I cannot be defeated,” King Boden thought between thrust and parry, “for I have the Magic Sword. The Tall Stranger swore to me.”
For hour upon hour the epic struggle raged without rest, quarter neither given nor taken. But then, just as the sun that had blazed down upon this momentous day seemed to weary, and kissed the horizon, King Boden lofted the Magic Sword high above his head and brought it down with a crashing fury greater than any before.

King Ezeck raised his sword in defence and, as steel clanged on steel, the blade of his weapon shattered. The broken tip fell to the ground. King Ezeck, in despair, let the hilt slip from his hand and join the rest of the now-useless weapon in the dirt.

Quietly he spoke. “King Boden, you have your victory.” He stole one last look at his daughter, Princess Alsanda, in the lines of the men of Icia. Then he closed his eyes and waited for the inevitable death.

But death did not come. Kind Boden, following the gaze of his adversary, also spotted the beautiful princess. He saw, even at this distance, the tears upon her face, and the sadness in her eyes, and he felt his heart leap.

“As King, you will never taste defeat again. But you will never know love.” The words of the Tall Stranger who had handed him the Magic Sword repeated themselves on his lips. He raised the Magic Sword one final time.

But the blow never fell.

Lowering the sword, he spoke, almost in a whisper, to King Ezeck. “Open your eyes, King Ezeck. I cannot strike you down.”

King Ezeck looked into the face of Boden. “What do you mean?”

“As a king, with this sword, I can never taste defeat.”

“So strike me down, for I will not live if my daughter is to remain your prisoner!”

Again Boden looked to the princess. “But, as a king, I will never know love.” He looked again at King Ezeck. “Therefore I choose no longer to be King! I am now a common man, and a common man cannot strike down a king.” And with that he laid the Magic Sword at King Ezeck’s feet.

“And what of my daughter?” said Ezeck, in a bare whisper.

“She is free,” he said. With a wave, he commanded his guards to release her. For a moment, Princess Alsanda was frozen to the spot. Then she, tearfully, ran into the arms of her father.

“Oh, my beautiful daughter,” cried King Ezeck, for tears had come to his battle-drawn face also, “I thought that I should never see your sweet face ever again.”

Ezeck turned to face Boden. “So how do we decide the battle?”

“What battle? There is no battle. There is no war. We should leave this place in peace, with honour.”

For a moment, Ezeck was unable to speak. “You could have won the day,” he said.

“I would have won nothing.”

“But is there nothing you would wish for?” said Ezeck.

Boden hesitated. “I can barely say this. But if I could have one thing, it would be to ask for the hand of your daughter, the beautiful Princess Alsanda, in marriage, for I am under her spell, a spell greater than that of any sword or weapon. And I ask, not demand. I would have her answer freely, as only her heart dictates, and I would be content with any answer, though I hope for only one.”

Princess Alsanda looked at Boden. Suddenly, now that he was no longer a king, it was as if a blindfold fell from her eyes, and she could see a handsome, wise and generous man. She turned to King Ezeck. “Father, this man is more noble than any I have ever met, nor even dreamed of. With your permission, nothing would make me happier than to be his bride.”

King Ezeck wiped the tears from his face, and for the first time since news of her capture in Icia had come to him, he smiled. “Then his bride you shall be, with my blessing.” Upon these words, she let go of her father, and embraced Boden.

At that moment, as the shade of evening was drawing upon them, a figure appeared from between the two now-silent battle lines. It was the Tall Stranger who had given Boden the sword so long ago.

Boden, recognising him, said, “How can we be of service to you?”

“It is you who have served me,” said the stranger. “I have merely come to collect the possession I lent to you.”

“You lent to me?” said Boden, astonished. “So it was never really in my ownership?”

“No man can own this sword. I take it back now, for its magic is done.”

“And what magic is that?” asked King Ezeck in awe.

The Tall Stranger faced both of them. “Know this truth,” he said. “It is a truth equally for king and peasant, high-born and humble, rich or poor. War is not the true purpose of any living thing.” He paused to smile at Boden and Princess Alsanda, hiding the sword away in his cloak.

“Then what is life’s true purpose?” Boden asked the Tall Stranger in a hushed voice.

The Tall Stranger looked one last time at the two former enemies. “Love is.”

And, with that, taking the Magic Sword with him, the Tall Stranger was gone.

THE END.

Tuesday 20 October 2009

MINUTES OWLS MEETING 19TH 0CT. 09.


PRESENT. Margaret (Chair), Tricia, Sue, Neil, Michael H., Pat, Cec, Bryan, Lynn, Liz, Michael L., Guest Chris,(Sue’s friend),and myself Judy.

APOLOGIES Tim, Carol, Alex, Tom H., Ishbel and Julie. (Get well wishes to all unwell)

Sue has had a poem accepted for a “Flow for All” Anthology, well done.
BEFORE AND AFTER WORKSHOP WRITING EVENING.

Led by Lynn who had brought several photos of well known paintings. We were asked to choose one and after looking at the picture to write either what happened before or after the painting.

Michael L. composed a letter to a soldier’s mother based on fact.
Judy wrote a story based how she saw the body language of child and parent.
Margaret had us in stitches over Botticelli’s Cupid and his harem.
Bryan wrote of a lost soldier looking out for the beautiful face haunting him.
Cecil wrote sensitively of a child ghost watching his earthly family grow old.
Pat hilariously composed the come uppence for Charley Green, swinging from a tight rope after showing off to the girls.
Michael H. began a mystery story inspired by 3 girls in a fishing boat by Monet.
Chris our guest gave a very descriptive piece about Monet’s mist into Death.
Van Neil Gogh!Entertained with a ghostly poetic piece heralding a new dawn.
Sue wrote imaginatively about a secret tryst surrounding a secret relationship.
Tricia wrote an horrific creepy piece of a lost girl being tempted to the home of a predator. We were all calling to the child not to go.
Liz led us to follow the antics of 2 drunken builders finali-ing in “THE SCREAM! “ (Which she did very frighteningly.)
Lynn completed the evening using an Italian picture of a terrace to tell of intrigue jealousy and murder around the corner.
All agreed yet another very enjoyable evening. Thanks Lynn.

NEXT TIME NOV. 2ND. THIS YEAR’S JO COWELL COMPETITION.

See you there All best Judy

Friday 9 October 2009

Next Meeting and Meeting of October 5th 2009

The next meeting of the OWLS will be held in a room in Church House Ormskirk 7-30 'til 10-pm on Monday October 19th will be a workshop evening run by Lynn. Then at the next meeting on November 2nd everybody is invited to contribute an adult 'Fairy Story.

The meeting on October 5th was a well attended Manuscript evening.
Carol Fenlon: read from her next novel about adoption which led to an interesting discussion about the legal legislation changes and affects on those concerned.
Michael: read more of Blakey's adventures in England from Australia.
Tim: an article on Science and Faith
Alex: more adventures of Henry the Camel and his friend Brock.
Bryan: read about Alex the Alien and
Ishbel: took us on a word and pictures tour of her early homes.

Saturday 12 September 2009

Next meeting September 21st

The meeting on Monday September 21st was for a children's story of up to 10,000 words.

Tuesday 8 September 2009

Sept 7th 2009

Competition night for a story with the first line“The boy was a disappointment to his father…"
As usual we had a varied response including a play from Alex and a poem from Margaret. Cecil ingeniously surprised us in punchline as he had written from Joseph’s position as father to Jesus. Tim, newcomer Joanne, Bryan and myself all wrote stories surrounding these words in various settings. Pat actually started a book!! (we want more) developing a very appealing character of a young boy with outstandingly amazing talents, but it was Ishbel who won with her excellent story about the father wanting a son with a good solid career ahead of him when the boy himself yearned to be a chef and who ended up winning a talent competition on TV and being hugged by his proud father at last. So Ishbel won the wine and we were all delighted to see her back after her long absence.
We had a very worthwhile critique session on the contributions after the break and finished off with a masterful short piece by Neil of a shooting amidst a blizzard which held some marvellous descriptive phraseology.
Committee meeting my house tomorrow evening 9th Sept. anyone welcome and any issues to be discussed contact me.
Agenda so far to cover, Jo Cowells, Anthologies, Storing of club records, membership, further programming and Christmas.
NEXT MEETING SEPT 21ST 7.30PM N.C.H.
A CHILDREN’S STORY IN UP TO 1,000 WORDS.

Tuesday 25 August 2009

Next meeting

Next meeting Monday September 2nd. 7.30 in Ormskirk Church house. Bring a short story up to 1,000 words beginning "The Boy was a disappointment to his father..
Committe meeting Wednesday Sptember 9th at Judy's house.

Saturday 22 August 2009


Our latest publication entitled 'Anthology of works by North West Writers' is a handy holiday or leisure read, full of stories, poems and even a short playlet. ISBN 9 78173553022 @£3-99 from Waterstones bookshops or Pritchards bookshops Formby. single copies post free from Ormskirk Writers c/o 43 Noel Gate, Ormskirk, Aughton, Lancs L39 5EE.
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Our meetings are lively and varied.

Tuesday 18 August 2009

PRESENT. Tom H., Trish, Liz, Neil, Michael L., Alex, Michael H., Carol, Pat, Bryan, Margaret, (Chair) and Judy.
APOLOGIES. Cec, (Get well soon), Sue, Ishbel, Lynn.
Minutes read of last meeting Matters arising.
Jo Cowell Competition. Please send in your entries asap Further details from myself or Graham, or previous minutes.
Anyone wishing to help sell anthologies contact Cecil or Ishbel.
Committee meeting Wed. Sept 9th 7.30pm Any member wishing to attend or ask for issues to be brought up please contact Judy.
Carol has invited everyone to her "back to school party." Please contact her if going Sat. Sept 5th 111 Blaguegate Lane. Tel no. 01695728320. It will be fun. Thanks Carol for hosting this.
Pat’s workshop "The influence of music on writing."
Pat played 2 short pieces,
1. Gymnopedie- Eric Satie 1866-1925.
This first piece led our writers to envisage scenes of tranquillity cornfields, blue seas and skies, rivers with or without punts set in both modern and more period times. Contributions were as varied and interesting as usual with dancing romantic themes right through to murder, outlinings of plot and searching for identity.
2. Gigue-from St paul’s Suite Gustav Holst 1874-1934.
The second piece was much more rousing but time prevented from doing it full justice. However many saw galloping horses leading to full blooded romantic scenes, domestic violence, murder, Devil work, shootings sparked from a long ago true story and both Dickens, Hardy, times and regal stories of the past. Much imaginative talent was created throughout the exercise hopefully inspiring new works to be heard at meetings in the future. A BIG THANK YOU TO PAT for all her work in presentation.
NEXT MEETING MON SEPT 7TH. A Short story up to 1,000 words beginning with the line, "The boy was a disappointment to his father…. There may be a vote on best contribution by secret ballot! So bring your best to read out on the night. All best Judy

Wednesday 5 August 2009

GREETINGS

HELLO FOLKS WE ARE NOW UP AND RUNNING CEC

Minutes Aug 3rd 2009

OWLS MEETING AUG 3RD 09.
Present. Carol, Michael, Sarah, Neil, Tom H. Alex(welcome back both of you) Cec, Bryan, Julie, Pat,(Chair), myself and guest Michael Hill.
Apologies. Graham, Lynn, Liz, Tricia, Sue, Margaret, Ishbel,Tim Angela.
Matters arising from read Minutes.
Jo Cowell competition. All members still urged to send Graham their anonymised contributions. Up to 1,000 words any genre to Graham Walker,13 Dorchester Rd., Upholland, Skelmersdale WN8 OAD. Cheque to OWLS £3.00 first entry and £2.00 for any additional ones.(Can be sent separately to Alex 12 Alexandra Rd. Southport PR9)NB or to Graham or handed in at next meeting.) For clarification contact myself or Graham on grahamwalker13@btinternet Results evening will be Nov. 3rd 09.
Anthologies. Cec been doing lots of hard selling but any member who can help with sales please offer services.
Committee Meeting due as soon as all members available ie Margaret, Pat, Alex, Tricia, Ishbel, Graham, Cec, myself and any members opting to join in. Issues for discussion.
a) Making final arrangements for this year Jo Cowell.
b)Signatories for cheques. c) Anthologies. d) Keeping OWL Records.
e) Next year Jo Cowell. F) AOB
Please note any member can add comments or attend committee meeting when arranged. All views welcomed.
Poetry Evening.
There was throughout general discussion surrounding poetry, its origins in song and verse, particular poets eg John Donne, Edward Lear, Adrien Henri, and GK Chesterton, with poems read out by members. Also read were poems from newspapers, our own past member Clara Sheen and a cheerful limerick re. "There was a Young Lady from Clyde. The mood dived between the serious war poems read, and the Nonsense supplied by Bryan. Julie had us all singing "The Owl and the Pussycat"!!!
There were also contributions from members own poems, not least Michael with his political one re expenses. The prize though must go to Pat for introducing most of us to Haiku with their 17 syllable 3 liners. She shared a few, added to by Carol well versed in Hiaku and a lovely finisher by Tom H. on "Metamorphasis". This concerned a caterpillar watching a butterfly wondering if he’d ever be able to fly.
Hope I’ve summarised satisfactorily but another thoroughly enjoyable evening.
Next time Aug 17th come ready to write. Pat will organise a workshop. (Just in case she is not well at the time also bring any work in progress for sharing and discussion as back up to the evening.) All Best Judy
THANKS TO ALL FOR TAKING PART. See you next time Judy

Tuesday 14 April 2009

MINUTES OWLS 6TH APRIL 09.

Present

Margaret (Chair), Julie, Tom Mc. Cec, Carol, Alex, Sylvia, Trish, Ishbel and Judy.

Apologies.

  1. Lynn, Liz, Sue, Graham, Tim, Pat, Bryan, Tom H. (We all wish you well) (Sorry if I’ve not included anyone I should have done.)
  2. Jo Cowell. Please send entries to Graham, any Genre about 1,000 words before end of June. (We are clarifying whether you identify yourself on each entry which will cost £3.50p. and let you know later. In meantime please be thinking of your entry.
    Anthology. Much thanks to Cec and Ishbel for all their hard work. They should be ready for sale by next meeting.
  3. Next meeting is our Dora Doyle poetry evening 20th April and we have hired the larger room downstairs on the left as courtesy of hard work by Julie it will be open to the public and other groups for a nominal fee of £1 as wine and juice and nibbles will be offered as well as usual tea and coffee.
  4. Carol reminded us of Pulp Idol Comp. which has been sent to you all who would like to send in first 3 chapters of your novel and meet at Engine rooms May 5th for one of the heats. Tonight at Engine rooms are readings from their own Skelmersdale Anthology. All welcome.

ARTICLE EVENING.

  1. Tom Mc. "An Independent View of the Welfare State." Centring mainly on idea to pay Grandparents for minding their own grandchildren.
  2. Julie gave an entertaining and humorous account of "Love your Papergirl or Else!!"
  3. Margaret treated us to a very informative history and up to present day on "Costume Jewellery"
  4. Judy had an axe to grind over there being no minimum wage for small time employers in "The Minimum Wage in today’s climate"
  5. Ishbel also had a bee in her bonnet this time about cars parking on pavements and wrote about "Paths are for Pedestrians!"
  6. Sylvia amused us all with an unfinished but definitely worth finishing piece on "Bombardments from the Media."
  7. Carol treated us to a piece entitled "Dolls Prams on Parade" and again informed many of us about the development and changes in pram styles.
  8. Cec finished with a very apt article to remind us "Do Not Despair." This told us the reasons why our works could be rejected and warned us all how to avoid the pitfalls.
    All pieces created a great deal of varied discussion and all of us were encouraged to try and get our writings published and come back and inform the club.


DON’T FORGET NEXT MEETING WILL DAUNT ON POETRY. APRIL 20TH See you there, all best Judy.

Tuesday 6 January 2009

FIRST OWL MEETING 2009 (JAN 5TH)

Present. Tim, Sarah, Tom H., Alex, Tom Mc. And myself Judy.
Apologies. Pat, Bryan, Cecil, Margaret, Julie, Sue, Ishbel, Liz and Lynn. (Apologies if I’ve missed anyone out). Get well soon, Pat, Bryan and Liz. For others hope problems resolve soon and a happy new year.

Notices.

  1. Letter and Cheque for £50 from Christine Chesshyre, (Dora Doyle’s daughter.)

  2. Cecil wrote in response to Mike Wilson’s request for 400 word summary of network day to put into Link. Thanks Cec.

  3. Thank you letter from Jackie, Inklings, for Network Day.

  4. New Church House being decorayed. Next meeting may need to be in a different room so be prepared.
Manuscript News.

Alex’ play has been accepted for Premiership and for Leverhulme Competition which links to All England Festival. Congrats.

MANUSCRIPT EVENING.

  1. Tom Mc presented a short play “The Gobstopper” using Tim Judy and himself which he’d been given as an exercise to include the following phrases: a) Did I ever tell you what happened to Brian, b) I had to distract him in the garden from erecting a bouncing castle, c) Well I think Mars bars are the answer. Thanks Tom a lot of fun and maybe we can use a similar idea for one of our workshops or for a homework task prior to a meeting.

  2. Judy brought her poem called February’s Children. Her first copy and a copy she has worked on since. Thankfully all there could see the improvement. Group were also able to give her some good advice to help her to continue working on it Thanks esp Tom H.

  3. Alex shared his first scene from “One More Rainbow” read by Sarah and Tom H. Excellent doialogue and so intriguing we’ll all have to go to see it at Civic Hall in March. Date to be given out later.

  4. Tim and Sarah shared some thoughts about what is interesting them at present. Tim feels he’s concentrating on the future from teenage perspective and Sarah is targeting particular short story competitions.

  5. Recommended books discussed were as follows. Enders Game by Orson Scott Card, Cloud Atlas by Mitchell, The Road by Cormack McCarthy.

The meeting finished 9.15pm NEXT MEETING Mon. Jan.19th Manuscript again so please bring any writing you are involved in with a view to reading 1,000 words Max.


Please note Committee meeting Tuesday 13th Jan at Ishbel’s garden house 7.0pm. We will be looking at programme for coming year so if anyone has suggestions please pass them on to any committee member and if any member would like to attend meeting with view to becoming a committee member please come along. We are short on the ground.

All best for 2009

Judy

 
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